An Experienced Rhyme

Be careful who you let in
Be careful to whom you share
A lot you'll have before you start
Yet finished you'll be bare
Empty of the newness of a true lovers touch
Empty of the feelings that made you give so much

Don’t let in the first one the one that makes you smile
Test them; critique them, for a little while.
See if their body backs up what they say
See if they show love, not just nights, but also days
Let in the one true lover, that in your heart, seems to linger
Then commit the love to the one who shows love on their finger

This entrance is a door that can never be closed
So open cautiously and righteously
Otherwise regret will show

Is it really hard to write to us?

But see they dont go to the movies man.
They dont go looking foward to a good cry
They don't love passionately and desperately
and then wonder why

Man! They dont - ha ha- they don't carry a diary
A list of love letters in their wallets just for her
And they dont prepare a smile for lifes miserables
When dreams have deffered.

They dont bare the symbol of life
They don't sacrifice for 9 months
But dont they give just as hard
In different ways just as much?

Dont they make up the other fifty
Dont they match to faithfulness
Arent they giving arent they caring
arent they important?

YES

So how is it we get mor men cater to womens need
In movies, in songs, they often supercede

WHy is it that a man can write about a womans diary
and in all of almost two hours
never be included in this mans remedy

Why are women loosed before the men
We were the head n not the tail

Ok, I gotta stop cause I aint rhymin like I want, n the emotions arent finding the speed to type and it aint no emoticons on here to replace the thoughts lol

Bruthas need help too...